The Gal Disturbed (Redone)

So, after Ive recieved critiques I wanted to do the before and after challenge.
So heres the final drawing
One thing is... I FORGOT THE CHAINS!!!
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Still looks nice, no?
I just wanna point this out, I love the lamppost over there :3
original picture: [link]

The Guy belongs to Disturbed
My design of female The Guy belongs to me